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Intro to Kisses from a Rose by ~Crotas:iconCrotas:





Her lips were soft and a drip of ice cream melted at the side from them as the hot sun burned on her tender skin, now slightly tinted brown from the hot summer days.

There had been a few changes in her life the past few weeks that made her look more mature and womanly than she was, in the first place. He didn’t notice the changes until he gently took away the melted ice cream from her lips as she smiled, pulling him towards herself, kissing him passionately. They both closed their eyes and while feeling himself, the most lucky man on earth, he shook awake from his dream, feeling a tear drop down on his face he opened his eyes only to notice that she was crying. While still kissing him he took his head away and looked at here with compassion in his eyes. He turned away from her, lowering his hands to his side. He slowly walked away, reaching toward the corner of the street. He looked at her and put up his hand as a sign for farewell as his lips formed the words, "See you at the other side... don’t leave me waiting."

Her tears were now flowing rapidly she smiled at him with sorrow in her eyes. She blinked, and suddenly he was gone, leaving only a few feathers scattered trough the air. Some people walked by giving her a sad look but most of them would just ignore her.

As day passed by to night, her tears were still dripping on the cold stone that she was standing on. Her stomach felt like a heavy brick. She was scared to move as she thought that the exhausting weight in here stomach would turn around and make the food all come out on the streets.

Her feelings felt as dark as shadow. She knew she needed to go home and take a hot shower and go to bed, but she feared that she would dream about him and wake up crying feeling an emptiness next to her. She knew she would smell his smell when walking in to her room, and she knew she couldn’t handle so many feelings at once.

Still knowing all this, she turned around, putting her hands with red painted nails gently in here pockets slowly making passé towards her home.

She could see the red bricks from far away and she sighed, On the view laying before her, her blue eyes lit up when she saw a man standing near her house. A smile replaced her earlier sad face and she started to run towards her home. When coming closer, she saw that the man that she was hoping to see was another man and she slowed her passé.

Her smile faded away and her hands quickly returned to the place in her pockets. The night was cold compared with the day, and she closed her vest. As she was barely home she took out the keys ignoring the man who she had been so happy about a few seconds ago. Before she turned the key, she turned around, seeing the man slowly walking up to her. She felt the hairs on her neck rising as a warning.

She tried to see the mans face but she couldn’t even see his eyes. Suddenly the man threw of his jacket and she covered here face with her hands, not knowing that standing before her was the man in whom she most wanted to see…
©2007-2009 ~Crotas
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!EDIT!
Hey boys and girls :P
so this is edited :D
thank you
:iconakashamorgan:

(go have a look at her page you wont regret it ;) )

Hey everybody I know I am pretty late wit this and that I were going to put it up yesterday but my editor wasn't nowhere to be found so tough luck :( BUT I am posting it up now :D I know its fairly short and I am thinking about keeping it a short story (will see in the comments if it will be a short or long story) Well thats all folks hope you enjoy ;D
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Oh, oh.. Me like! Me love! Me fav! *jumping around*
Great.. I want more...

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"It started like a... but ended like something else."
:D good that you like/love it :D thanks for the fave!

*well better get working faster for u ;)*

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Yes, you better ;)

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"It started like a... but ended like something else."
Maybe if your lucky I can post it up today :D

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This is really good.

Really sad, though.
D:

You're very in touch with the woman's feelings.

*nods*
:D thank you really much :D that just made my day right their my day was kinda boring but this made it alright a great thanks to you :D

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Aww, well, I'm glad to help.

You really are a good writer, so don't let anyone hold you back.

(not even that pesky writer's block.)

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hahah thank you a whole bunch! I owe a big thanks to you and to another girl for giving me such big inspirations (by reading your stories) I went like hey they can do it then I can 2 :D so here I am posting up stories :P I am glad you liked it your a big example to me as I red your stories I thought you were an old prof but then I saw your 16 and I went like :O what not an old fart but a new guy who writes like this well if he can do it I can :D so as I said before here I am now :D and I just red that eternal is finished but its at episode 18 :S in my eyes it isn't finished :S how come?

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Lol.

I'm an not an old fart!

And I'm not a guy!

Hahaha.

Oh well.

xD

Well, the story hasn't ended there yet, that's why it's not finished.
:P

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